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the idea was good, but the execution left alot to be desired... this tends to happen when people are making game parody flash animations, first off, the animation is amateur.. now hold on, thats not an insult, amateur animation quality is perfectly acceptable if youve only been doing it for a little while, besides the animation isnnt near the level where it would take away from the actual flash,

second the script sounded like it needed more planning from the get go, a lot of it sounded like you just wrote down the first thing that came to your head, when having a go at a pop culture based comedy flashes always, ALWAYS check, check, double check, tripple check and then check again, when you go to write dont use the first joke the first joke that comes to mind, because if its the first joke you think of then its most likely the first joke everyone else would think of, failing to try and look for these can commonly end up with you having cliché jokes.

Some of the dialog was fine, my gripe with it was that at many times during the recording it sounded like i could practically here you reading it outloud from the script, reherse and remember your lines, that way you can focus 100% on good expression rarther than reading what you wrote.

3.5 stars - the flash had its issues although non of which are issues that cant be flattened out and improved upon with work and experiance, its obvious that theres effort here, so it deserves at least the 3 for that, overall i just think this is just a case of sticking to it, practise more with flash and perhaps test out some other graphic tablets, the wacom intous is great for begginers.

was this inspired by the world within a sock series?

liked it! nice animation, good colour... just try and find a better room to record your voice in, the quality will only go up :)

GristlyBear responds:

Sounds like a plan, glad you liked it! The quality of the audio has always been an afterthought, but I'll pay more attention to it next time for sure!

hilarious! love it!

really nice! i love your animation style and the characters are awesome, really, really enjoyed it :)

never before has such a dramatic and entheusing twist been used! such drama! such luxuory cats!

lies! this isnt a flash ... or of any quality

HardHart responds:

It's a swf file therefore it's a flash. Didn't say it was a quality one though.

i like it, it was funny, but the design is stolen from cyanide and happyness, try to be more original

the ending made me laugh soooooo much XD loved it!

i love the people who clearly hate the show, take out their petty rage by claiming that the animation or genral qualityof this flash is "poor" when anyone with any real concept of the animation process ( or at least the IQ of the muffin i had for breakfast) can clearly see that the animation is well done XD good job guys!

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