the idea was good, but the execution left alot to be desired... this tends to happen when people are making game parody flash animations, first off, the animation is amateur.. now hold on, thats not an insult, amateur animation quality is perfectly acceptable if youve only been doing it for a little while, besides the animation isnnt near the level where it would take away from the actual flash,
second the script sounded like it needed more planning from the get go, a lot of it sounded like you just wrote down the first thing that came to your head, when having a go at a pop culture based comedy flashes always, ALWAYS check, check, double check, tripple check and then check again, when you go to write dont use the first joke the first joke that comes to mind, because if its the first joke you think of then its most likely the first joke everyone else would think of, failing to try and look for these can commonly end up with you having cliché jokes.
Some of the dialog was fine, my gripe with it was that at many times during the recording it sounded like i could practically here you reading it outloud from the script, reherse and remember your lines, that way you can focus 100% on good expression rarther than reading what you wrote.
3.5 stars - the flash had its issues although non of which are issues that cant be flattened out and improved upon with work and experiance, its obvious that theres effort here, so it deserves at least the 3 for that, overall i just think this is just a case of sticking to it, practise more with flash and perhaps test out some other graphic tablets, the wacom intous is great for begginers.